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    dots Submission Name: Sunsetdots
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    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.08 - 366/364/154
    Words: 181
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1013
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       wrote after seeing the most beautiful pink and purple sunset...it reminded me f her wth her purple hair and pink lips...

    2nd draft needs work


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    dotsSunsetdots
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    The plum sky plumed like a peacock
    In gold and pink
    Which smeared into the blue until it set purple
    Over the beige remnants of summer

    Speckled over the hazel fields
    Are shards of Spring
    A pinch of green, a pirouette of yellow, a hint of red
    Fragments in blackberry winter
    Beckoning the blossoms to burst from the buds

    Here lies my heart
    A lone blackberry gilded by the sun

    I offered it to you-
    I placed it between your teeth
    I marveled as it twizzled on your tongue

    Your mouth now stained
    Your hibiscus lips now swaddled in purple
    I cradled them with mine own

    I picked the black vestiges from your teeth
    I tried to stitch them together
    To find a semblance of that blackberry


    The mélange of purple and periwinkle
    Reminded me of that sunset

    Which plumed like a peacock
    In gold and pink until it set purple in the horizon

    DiCicco Cosentino ©




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      I like how descriptive you are with colors. Very beautiful imagery, well done.
    | Posted on 2018-05-08 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]


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