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    Author: SavedDragon
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 303/258/84
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    To do the dues
    Due diligence paid
    To be only human
    Flesh and bones to be made

    To cry to sob to whine to weep
    To laugh to smile to Joke to sleep
    Memories forever keep
    The times to travel to do to reap

    To remain alone
    For the sake of the god’s
    No friends, nor foes
    Nor criminals nor frauds

    To strive and survive
    To hear sounds that sound loud
    To feel free and alive
    To be alone in the crowd






    Submitted on 2018-02-15 18:31:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yes. This world is one where lonesomeness is often wholesomeness. Thank you for sharing this very whimsical piece.
    | Posted on 2018-08-19 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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