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    dots Submission Name: Alone in the Crowddots

    Author: SavedDragon
    Elite Ratio:    3.62 - 302/257/81
    Words: 401
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsAlone in the Crowddots

    You hear the sound
    Meshed up in your head
    Everyone all around
    Yet you feel dead

    A friend will call
    You do not want to speak
    Memories you don’t recall
    You feel so weak

    Daylight seems dark
    The night seems to rise
    No journeys embark
    Sleep has become your demise

    Music is noise
    The melody yells
    Can’t play with your toys
    Heaven has turned into hell

    People have judged
    Love you no more
    No one has loved
    No not anymore

    When you hit the ground
    People will frown
    No one around
    Not one sound

    Family disowns for one mistake
    Shunned and neglected
    No support at no one’s sake
    Dismissed and rejected

    Accomplishments gone unnoticed
    Errors gone magnified
    Sadness fills my heart
    And faults gone magnified

    Tired of proving
    Tired of lies
    Tired of loving
    Tired of spies
    Leave me alone
    I’d rather be free
    Then retrained
    Just let me be me

    I am not perfect
    Though I have tried
    I respect myself
    Have nothing to hide

    So before you judge
    Before you hate
    Please take a look
    And do not hate

    I did my dues
    Due diligence paid
    I am only human
    Flesh and bones I was made

    I cry I sob I wine I weep
    I laugh I smile I Joke I sleep
    My memories I always keep
    The times I travel I do reap

    But, it doesn’t change
    The sorrow within
    Abuse from both ends
    The things you said

    Am I your one and only
    Am I your one and only
    Do you know what that is?

    I think not
    For time of today
    Monogamy has not
    One soul if it may
    Cupid has been shot

    I remain alone
    For the sake of the god’s
    No friends, nor foes
    Nor criminals nor frauds

    I stay with my thoughts
    The memories
    Of good times
    But the bad thoughts remain
    I try to hold back the pain

    They want to see me hurt
    People want to see me cry
    They don’t want me happy
    They wish I would die

    I still live and try to survive
    I hear sounds and they sound so loud
    They want to see me take my life
    But I remain alone in the crowd

    By Sharon Marroquin

    Submitted on 2018-02-15 18:31:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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