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Author: SavedDragon
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Words: 90
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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To do the dues
Due diligence paid
To be only human
Flesh and bones to be made

To cry to sob to whine to weep
To laugh to smile to Joke to sleep
Memories forever keep
The times to travel to do to reap

To remain alone
For the sake of the god’s
No friends, nor foes
Nor criminals nor frauds

To strive and survive
To hear sounds that sound loud
To feel free and alive
To be alone in the crowd

Submitted on 2018-02-15 18:31:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Yes. This world is one where lonesomeness is often wholesomeness. Thank you for sharing this very whimsical piece.
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