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    dots Submission Name: Once Againdots
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    Author: krs3332003
    Elite Ratio:    6.47 - 144/114/64
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       This poem is dedicated to my friend Holly and her twin girls: Dylan and Piper.


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    dotsOnce Againdots
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    An age ago
    I remember it well
    How lightning struck
    and left me changed

    Through storms
    against the wind
    We drifted
    but never parted

    For fate
    it seems
    had more work
    For us

    Once again
    I find myself here
    Once again
    I see you

    How time
    has changed us
    Softened, tempered
    and drained us tearless

    Yet time has given
    Given birth to the new
    The Loved
    Such happiness

    And so I spin
    Unbalanced, but directed
    You do know
    I’ve always been here

    Once again
    Lightning has found me
    Once again
    I see you

    2018 by Kelly R. Sullivan




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