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Still Fighting See?

Author: ForgottenGraves
ASL Info:    20, Male
Elite Ratio:    0.49 - 5 /121 /135
Words: 114
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Still Fighting See?

I want to stop pretending
But I'm stuck here just defending

This pain seems to have no ending
So my love for life is pending

I think its easy to see
That I'm not who I want to be

So please lets just agree
Before things get to ugly

I just want a home please
One where my heart won't freeze

But I wanna keep that nice breeze
So I feel safe to pray on my knees

I know I'm not okay
But I fight through this all day

Now I've run out of words to say
So I beg you please don't go away

Submitted on 2018-02-19 23:42:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  The poem is written in a rhythm. Sweet and human feelings are being reflected in the poem. Nice work.
| Posted on 2018-06-28 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
  Very good, deep thoughts, well put togetrher.
| Posted on 2018-02-20 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

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