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    dots Submission Name: Are not cheap (working title)dots
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    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.08 - 368/364/166
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 619
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 986



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       Written after I made a sarcastic comment that Hurt my beloved. Pajarita, you are this and infinitely more.


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    dotsAre not cheap (working title)dots
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    The Ravens fell as parcels of night-
    Their lithe, black lit eyes
    Hold your white form-

    You who are glorious geometry,
    The fire that skipped from the first stone,
    Light woven from darkness;
    Intricately
    Designed by
    He
    That contains the universe in a single cell of His.

    Oh
    Handful of earth
    You are the crown of amaranth,
    The purple flower that feeds the gemmed
    Grain that nourishes the world.

    You are
    Lightning
    That lights the day, the
    Incandescent
    Wings of God
    Thrashing
    Iridescent-

    You are magma-
    The fiery cardinal that boils beneath us all.
    You are to be revered
    For your radiance,
    In how you wear the universe.

    How is it that you wrap the sultry stars
    Around your waist as galaxies?

    DiCicco Cosentino©




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      Whoa.
    | Posted on 2018-02-27 00:00:00 | by Chelebel | [ Reply to This ]
      Back to the garden of Eden, in harmony with all. Who needs Apple Jack, we must transcend! LOL This should buy you a pardon and more....... munificently omnipresent swanky saunter. The thought of such fecundities.
    | Posted on 2018-02-25 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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