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Are not cheap (working title)

Author: rev.jpfadeproof
ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
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Written after I made a sarcastic comment that Hurt my beloved. Pajarita, you are this and infinitely more.

Are not cheap (working title)

The Ravens fell as parcels of night-
Their lithe, black lit eyes
Hold your white form-

You who are glorious geometry,
The fire that skipped from the first stone,
Light woven from darkness;
Designed by
That contains the universe in a single cell of His.

Handful of earth
You are the crown of amaranth,
The purple flower that feeds the gemmed
Grain that nourishes the world.

You are
That lights the day, the
Wings of God

You are magma-
The fiery cardinal that boils beneath us all.
You are to be revered
For your radiance,
In how you wear the universe.

How is it that you wrap the sultry stars
Around your waist as galaxies?

DiCicco Cosentino©

Submitted on 2018-02-25 07:06:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Posted on 2018-02-27 00:00:00 | by Chelebel | [ Reply to This ]
  Back to the garden of Eden, in harmony with all. Who needs Apple Jack, we must transcend! LOL This should buy you a pardon and more....... munificently omnipresent swanky saunter. The thought of such fecundities.
| Posted on 2018-02-25 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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