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    dots Submission Name: cleverly shunneddots
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    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 368/381/226
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Misc/What is
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    cleverly shunned
    this clever lad
    who once was
    quite celebrated
    applauded, even; 
    that once and
    clever tyke --
    little did he know
    one forward day
    when he'd've all
    up and grown
    dependable lads 
    are what's wanted
    clever 'uns were
    interesting enough
    for a bit of a larf but
    just a tad annoying;
    when things gotta
    be done - go figure
    dependability and
    cleverness could
    be so incompatible 
    in people's heads;
    so be rather dull
    but trustworthy 
    than yip yap like a pup
    that's cleverly shunned







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