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    dots Submission Name: Wavelengthdots
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    Author: saartha
    ASL Info:    27/F/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 230/385/134
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWavelengthdots
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    Though it is dark and chill
    and the clouds have hushed in
    from miles overseas
    to make the mountain shudder --

    though I can not truly see
    a thing from the fogged,
    sleeping street, in a town
    I've never met before
    and never will again --

    even still, even still
    always there is the comfort of lamplight,
    its photons of rain.




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