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Author: saartha
ASL Info:    27/F/US
Elite Ratio:    4.01 - 230 /393 /145
Words: 63
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Though it is dark and chill
and the clouds have hushed in
from miles overseas
to make the mountain shudder --

though I can not truly see
a thing from the fogged,
sleeping street, in a town
I've never met before
and never will again --

even still, even still
always there is the comfort of lamplight,
its photons of rain.

Submitted on 2018-03-12 23:31:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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