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    Author: saartha
    ASL Info:    27/F/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 230/390/136
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsBonddots
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    It’s nice, you know,
    the way the rain clings
    as if everything
    were too precious to let go

    the handrails and plum blossoms,
    the slick lines of his hunting jacket
    as he hurries in from the wet

    laughing, because
    you can’t not laugh

    and the storm
    too early for spring
    too late for winter
    so just storm

    nods lazily over the city
    like reading a favorite book.




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