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Author: saartha
ASL Info:    27/F/US
Elite Ratio:    4.01 - 230 /393 /145
Words: 72
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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It’s nice, you know,
the way the rain clings
as if everything
were too precious to let go

the handrails and plum blossoms,
the slick lines of his hunting jacket
as he hurries in from the wet

laughing, because
you can’t not laugh

and the storm
too early for spring
too late for winter
so just storm

nods lazily over the city
like reading a favorite book.

Submitted on 2018-03-12 23:31:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Oh my God you have always been one of top favorite writers
And from what I can tell after so long, you've only gotten that much more astonishing. I cannot thank you enough for sharing your poetry. I would pay you if I could, but I'm broke

Thank you again.
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