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Linger


Author: saartha
ASL Info:    27/F/US
Elite Ratio:    4.01 - 230 /393 /145
Words: 25
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Linger



Even though
it's all fleeting
as bird tracks
in the snow

I weave a coat
warm and golden

of these small,
luminous thoughts.




Submitted on 2018-03-12 23:31:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Ah! What a beaut. This is absolutely everything, thank you so much.
| Posted on 2018-08-19 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
  All is temporal yet time is eternal, never to repeat itself.
| Posted on 2018-03-13 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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