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    dots Submission Name: Lingerdots
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    Author: saartha
    ASL Info:    27/F/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.01 - 230/393/145
    Words: 25
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsLingerdots
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    Even though
    it's all fleeting
    as bird tracks
    in the snow

    I weave a coat
    warm and golden

    of these small,
    luminous thoughts.




    Submitted on 2018-03-12 23:31:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ah! What a beaut. This is absolutely everything, thank you so much.
    | Posted on 2018-08-19 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      All is temporal yet time is eternal, never to repeat itself.
    | Posted on 2018-03-13 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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