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    dots Submission Name: Pain, an elixir.dots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 272/107/55
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPain, an elixir.dots
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    Pain deciphers new doors.
    Pain deciphers new directions.
    Pain deciphers new avenues.
    Pain deciphers new ways.

    Pain transforms thoughts.
    Pain transforms mind.
    Pain transforms life.
    Pain transforms world.

    Pain guides connection.
    Pain guides contemplation.
    Pain guides composure.
    Pain guides compassion.

    Pain sprouts hope.
    Pain sprouts light.
    Pain sprouts resolution.
    Pain sprouts evolution.

    Pain accomplishes virtues.
    Pain accomplishes accolades.
    Pain accomplishes goal.
    Pain accomplishes purpose.




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