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    dots Submission Name: new moondots
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    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 368/381/226
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsnew moondots
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    sighing gaze, relief
    up in the sky, floating high
    a day's toil and turmoil
    now swallowed up, entire
    each breath smooth and free
    there's even not enough moon
    for it to really be blue

     

     





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