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    Author: Daniel Barlow
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    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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                        the eyes, drawn to a blue-heaven, picture

         

                        a plane that tried to hold -
    and could not.






    Submitted on 2018-04-04 13:46:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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