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    dots Submission Name: Wishdots
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    Author: Daniel Barlow
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsWishdots
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    I want to be about nothing that has already been said,
    have a James Bay' tune writ in a Hawking' equation
    make the steep climb to
    Alpha Centauri.








    Submitted on 2018-04-10 04:35:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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