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Author: Daniel Barlow
Elite Ratio:    5.93 - 2138 /2109 /1700
Words: 38
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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I want to be about nothing that has already been said,
have a James Bay' tune writ in a Hawking' equation
make the steep climb to Alpha Centauri.








Submitted on 2018-04-10 04:35:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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