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Submission Name: Break Up dots

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Author:	WriteSomething
Elite Ratio:	3.56 - 24/17/9
Words:	44

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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Break Up dots

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You will be the No One Special,
rarely mentioned in my story,
details dulled to "don't remember",
brushed off with a shrug of shoulder.
History will write us Strangers
"Us" divided, "Ours" destroyed
leaving "Me" the single factor
because the "You" is void.

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.