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    dots Submission Name: The Promisedots
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    Author: annie0888
    ASL Info:    49/f/LA
    Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 327/382/122
    Words: 253
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Promisedots
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    Blessed are the dumpster divers, the gettin’ by-ers
    The lied to and the liars.
    Blessed are you if you're out of the loop
    Out of line, out of time
    On your third third strike.
    You have another second chance.

    Blessed are the teachers, the garbage
    collectors, the cops and the thugs
    Black lives, brown lives, blue lives
    The ninety-nine.
    You are represented, you matter.

    Blessed are the terminal
    The trapped, the tapped out
    The drowning and the dying
    The quitters and the fighters.
    Grab your lifeline, you have rescue.

    Blessed are the inmates, the outcasts
    The up-and-coming, the down-and-out.
    For the cut off, shut in
    Shut down and shut out
    There is an open door.

    Blessed are the addicts and the abusers
    The cranked up, coked up
    Cooked up and choked up
    The buyers and the sellers
    You marathoners on a treadmill.
    There is an intervention coming.

    Blessed are you, the neighbor who labors
    You nine-to-fivers, overtimers
    You ADHDs, OCDs, PTSDs
    All you weary, take your rest.

    Blessed are the losers, the lost
    And the lost in the shuffle
    The last in line.
    See the light, you are seen.

    Blessed are the deaf, and blessed are the silenced
    The unschooled and the unnoticed
    The forgetful and forgotten
    Raise your voices, you are heard

    Blessed are you, the misunderstood
    The mistaken, the shaken
    The unwashed, unwanted, unforgiven.

    All you diamonds in the rough.
    Take heart; you will shine.




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