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    dots Submission Name: One Thingdots
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    Author: Wolfwatching
    ASL Info:    28/Male/Ireland
    Elite Ratio:    7.65 - 96/137/119
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsOne Thingdots
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    One thing that you're gone
    Invisible behind my wall
    Of sleeps lethal injection

    One thing memories burn
    In false testimonies
    Of their conception

    Bared witness to and sustained
    A certain horror recounted;
    It's one thing to have you look away

    Quite another to lay in my bed
    While they euthanise me, but love
    That the words go too?




    Submitted on 2018-04-30 07:04:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The poem small but strong. It Almost feels ghostly within yourself not being aloud to say anything being euthanized. It deffenitly caught my attention, liked it.

    Thanks for sharing

    Faid
    | Posted on 2018-05-22 00:00:00 | by faideddarkness | [ Reply to This ]


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