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    dots Submission Name: A Sonnet for Ninadots
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    Author: SavedDragon
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    dotsA Sonnet for Ninadots
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    Mischievous in beauty, her freedom
    Like a running horse on a prairie farm
    Reckless is she, but not to mislead them
    She runs, runs, runs, runs, but never too far

    She sang songs of love, hopeless may she be
    For years, not days she played with the fire
    Until they all got burned, but not by she
    Reaping rewards of her own desire

    She spoke too soon, more often of her mind
    Her mouth swung words like the edges of swords
    Careless in her wander of deeds unkind
    The braveness in her dance, silent accords

    As if another could kill this ego
    But she herself will never let her go




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