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    dots Submission Name: Life changes in a momentdots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 271/107/55
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLife changes in a momentdots
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    Realization in a moment.
    Revelation in a moment.
    Reward in a moment.

    Destruction in a moment.
    Disgrace in a moment.
    Adversity in a moment.

    Grace in a moment.
    Euphoria in a moment.
    Nexus in a moment.

    Development in a moment.
    Descent in a moment.
    Destiny in a moment.

    Comprehension in a moment.
    Contemplation in a moment.
    Connection in a moment.




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