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    dots Submission Name: Be Freedots
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    Author: hybridsongwrite
    ASL Info:    20 / M / MN, USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 185/164/70
    Words: 367
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 731
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    dotsBe Freedots
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    You are the author with a pen in your hand writing the book
    Every day can be a new day if you know where to look
    Every thing can be a little bit better with a different outlook
    Choose to see the silver lining instead of the toll that it took

    Cause when the storm passes, a rainbow can be seen
    So too is the beauty in the downfall and total release

    Be what you need to be
    Don't let others limit your possibilities
    Open up your mind and be free
    I said open up your mind and be free
    Be what you need to be
    Live for the now, the life that you lead
    Open up your mind and be free
    I said open up your mind and be free

    When you live for others it's far too easy to lose sight
    On what you believe and what you hold to be morally right
    But what better time than now to prepare for the fight
    Cause the darkness that comes cannot scare off the light

    Cause when the storm passes, a rainbow can be seen
    So too is the beauty in the downfall and total release

    Be what you need to be
    Don't let others limit your possibilities
    Open up your mind and be free
    I said open up your mind and be free
    Be what you need to be
    Live for the now, the life that you lead
    Open up your mind and be free
    I said open up your mind and be free

    Don't hold back, my friend
    Cause I swear by this truth
    Regret comes round again
    When you do not know you
    You have to live with your choice
    The things that you do
    Proclaim it with your voice
    And tell us what you've needed to

    Be what you need to be
    Don't let others limit your possibilities
    Open up your mind and be free
    I said open up your mind and be free
    Be what you need to be
    Live for the now, the life that you lead
    Open up your mind and be free
    I said open up your mind and be free




    Submitted on 2018-05-15 16:15:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I agree, be yourself, explore the possibilities, revel in your prospectus for only in enjoying yourself can you find an outlook to make sociality a giving relationship.
    | Posted on 2018-05-15 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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