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Author:	faideddarkness
ASL Info:	28 - Male - Idaho
Elite Ratio:	6.53 - 101/55/51
Words:	164

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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In My Head dots

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There’s a wound I can’t ignore no matter how hard I try

I would take it to the grave if it would just let me die

It’s a bleeding that’s filling inside my brain

This broken heart leaching off my heaviest pain

A wind that’s straining inside my chest

One last breath fleeting like an unwelcome guest

If my voice could escape I’d fill the sky with my screams

Howling cries tearing through the darkness only in my dreams

But I can’t even clench my fist to raise it in the air

So much hate birthed for my last love who has not a care

Now my mind lays this devastated body on the floor

Suffocation behind these eyes left chilling to the core

Searching for a cure to a disease that will always win

Battling a war inside my head that will never have an end

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