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    dots Submission Name: In My Headdots
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    Author: faideddarkness
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Idaho
    Elite Ratio:    6.53 - 101/55/51
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsIn My Headdots
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    There’s a wound I can’t ignore no matter how hard I try

    I would take it to the grave if it would just let me die

    It’s a bleeding that’s filling inside my brain

    This broken heart leaching off my heaviest pain

    A wind that’s straining inside my chest

    One last breath fleeting like an unwelcome guest

    If my voice could escape I’d fill the sky with my screams

    Howling cries tearing through the darkness only in my dreams

    But I can’t even clench my fist to raise it in the air

    So much hate birthed for my last love who has not a care

    Now my mind lays this devastated body on the floor

    Suffocation behind these eyes left chilling to the core

    Searching for a cure to a disease that will always win

    Battling a war inside my head that will never have an end




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