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In My Head
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In My Head
There’s a wound I can’t ignore no matter how hard I try
I would take it to the grave if it would just let me die
It’s a bleeding that’s filling inside my brain
This broken heart leaching off my heaviest pain
A wind that’s straining inside my chest
One last breath fleeting like an unwelcome guest
If my voice could escape I’d fill the sky with my screams
Howling cries tearing through the darkness only in my dreams
But I can’t even clench my fist to raise it in the air
So much hate birthed for my last love who has not a care
Now my mind lays this devastated body on the floor
Suffocation behind these eyes left chilling to the core
Searching for a cure to a disease that will always win
Battling a war inside my head that will never have an end
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