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    dots Submission Name: Fathoms of the Lullaby Seadots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 75/182/217
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsFathoms of the Lullaby Seadots
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    Led by a dream,
    echoing strings,
    shadows of sun and moon;
    autumn and spring time melody,
    lead you silently to me.

    Ponder seasons
    of snow and honey -
    if beliefs come true,
    and whether you will wake too soon,
    sailing in the night to me.




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