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    dots Submission Name: 4th Season of Vivaldidots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 75/191/246
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dots4th Season of Vivaldidots
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    Winter as lictor,
    which tithes our tired sun,
    into ghoulish predilections for
    the naive sons, soldiers, daughters and whores.

    Cannibalistic ne'er-do-well,
    unaware that feast or famine,
    leads malevolent men to cemetery bells
    to shovels and spades which dug wells,
    cold earth and Hell.

    Time embraced fire,
    taxing mind of William Occam,
    to collapse on the razor shores in icey ire
    of God or damned dreams, deities and desires.

    Altruistic martyr,
    sacrificed in the name of,
    circumincession or perhaps farther
    along false dichotomies to a song which habors
    humanity no longer.




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      This was published on my father's birthday; an enlightening day for me. Thank you, His Name, I have always favored your poetry.
    | Posted on 2018-08-19 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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