Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Cagedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: distortedcloud
    ASL Info:    25/M/London
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 6/8/7
    Words: 413
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 65
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2422



    Description:
       https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kTsOIB4oBac


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsCagedots
    -------------------------------------------


    i been rolling over in my bed
    i can still see your face in my head
    some days i feel like im dead
    i wonder why theres nothing left
    why theres nothing left

    i locked away my heart in the chest
    i guess i didn’t know what was best
    whispers in the winter mornings
    where i could feel your breath
    snow crunching under every step
    you were my flower
    that got devoured
    by my hate instead
    i lost my way that day you left…

    i been rolling over in my bed
    i can still see your face in my head
    some days i feel like im dead
    i wonder why theres nothing left
    why theres nothing left

    you gave me the keys
    and i gave them back
    you gave me your time
    an i wasted that
    i lied to your face to keep my heart intact
    it broke me inside when i saw impact

    you gave me your lips
    and i pushed them away
    grabbed me round my waist
    and you begged me to stay
    im plagued by your love whys it giving me pain
    if only you knew how much it fucked with my brain

    i been rolling over in my bed
    i can still see your face in my head
    some days i feel like im dead
    i wonder why theres nothing left
    why theres nothing left

    can i still find you on your side of town
    did we build that bridge just to burn it down
    i saw you last christmas
    you never made a sound
    i guess what goes around comes right back around

    i been rolling over in my bed
    i can still see your face in my head
    some days i feel like im dead
    i wonder why theres nothing left
    why theres nothing left

    the cage bird sings
    and flaps his wings
    you fixed me up with a wooden splint
    an your crooked grin
    when you cooking things
    i wish i didn’t have to reminisce
    on these fucking things
    i be lost in dreams of what could have been
    i just couldn’t find the strength to speak
    i just couldn’t fucking believe you where here
    but its not meant to be…

    i been rolling over in my bed
    i can still see your face in my head
    some days i feel like i’m dead
    i wonder why theres nothing left
    why theres nothing left




    Submitted on 2018-06-27 12:10:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    202149

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    Deaf Dumb and Blind is no excuse written by poetotoe
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    Incubus written by monad
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Giving written by jjd
    Push written by JanePlane
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    This written by Chelebel
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    Ten Poems written by Wolfwatching
    Bond written by saartha
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    Cage written by distortedcloud
    It's been a while written by Sharati_hottie

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry