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    dots Submission Name: Cagedots
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    Author: distortedcloud
    ASL Info:    25/M/London
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 6/8/7
    Words: 413
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 764
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    Bytes: 2422



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    dotsCagedots
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    i been rolling over in my bed
    i can still see your face in my head
    some days i feel like im dead
    i wonder why theres nothing left
    why theres nothing left

    i locked away my heart in the chest
    i guess i didn’t know what was best
    whispers in the winter mornings
    where i could feel your breath
    snow crunching under every step
    you were my flower
    that got devoured
    by my hate instead
    i lost my way that day you left…

    i been rolling over in my bed
    i can still see your face in my head
    some days i feel like im dead
    i wonder why theres nothing left
    why theres nothing left

    you gave me the keys
    and i gave them back
    you gave me your time
    an i wasted that
    i lied to your face to keep my heart intact
    it broke me inside when i saw impact

    you gave me your lips
    and i pushed them away
    grabbed me round my waist
    and you begged me to stay
    im plagued by your love whys it giving me pain
    if only you knew how much it fucked with my brain

    i been rolling over in my bed
    i can still see your face in my head
    some days i feel like im dead
    i wonder why theres nothing left
    why theres nothing left

    can i still find you on your side of town
    did we build that bridge just to burn it down
    i saw you last christmas
    you never made a sound
    i guess what goes around comes right back around

    i been rolling over in my bed
    i can still see your face in my head
    some days i feel like im dead
    i wonder why theres nothing left
    why theres nothing left

    the cage bird sings
    and flaps his wings
    you fixed me up with a wooden splint
    an your crooked grin
    when you cooking things
    i wish i didn’t have to reminisce
    on these fucking things
    i be lost in dreams of what could have been
    i just couldn’t find the strength to speak
    i just couldn’t fucking believe you where here
    but its not meant to be…

    i been rolling over in my bed
    i can still see your face in my head
    some days i feel like i’m dead
    i wonder why theres nothing left
    why theres nothing left




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