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In the end


Author: Janesaddiction
ASL Info:    48/F/Somewhere on A1A
Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 8 /25 /20
Words: 55
Class/Type: Misc /Nostalgia
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In the end



Back to the 9 to 5
Am I out of vacation days?

Rules unheeded
Am I no longer the parent?

Humility replaced with narcissism
Am I in the right place?

Words have lost their flow
Am I no longer your muse?

Imitating life
In the end, it all ends





Submitted on 2018-07-17 08:49:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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