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    dots Submission Name: In the enddots
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    Author: Janesaddiction
    ASL Info:    48/F/Somewhere on A1A
    Elite Ratio:    1.94 - 8/25/19
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Misc/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 1090
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 349



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    dotsIn the enddots
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    Back to the 9 to 5
    Am I out of vacation days?

    Rules unheeded
    Am I no longer the parent?

    Humility replaced with narcissism
    Am I in the right place?

    Words have lost their flow
    Am I no longer your muse?

    Imitating life
    In the end, it all ends





    Submitted on 2018-07-17 08:49:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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