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    dots Submission Name: You Make Me speechlessdots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/160
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsYou Make Me speechlessdots
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    You make me speechless,
    You are the question,
    that makes all questions fall away,
    You are neither this or that
    in the forest,
    but you are THAT.




    Submitted on 2018-07-17 14:49:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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