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Commencement


Author: Ramneet
ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Commencement



A day of celebration.
A day of jubilation.
A day of felicitation.

A day of accolade.
A day of ovation.
A day of declaration.

A day of gratitude.
A day of reflection.
A day of satisfaction.

A day of new beginning.
A day of new projection.
A day of new direction.

Life commences every day.
Mind commences every day.
World commences every day.




Submitted on 2018-07-30 00:17:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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