Commencement by Ramneet

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Submission Name: Commencement dots

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Author:	Ramneet
ASL Info:	33/F/Boston
Elite Ratio:	2.94 - 272/107/55
Words:	68

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	980
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	478

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Commencement dots

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A day of celebration.
A day of jubilation.
A day of felicitation.

A day of accolade.
A day of ovation.
A day of declaration.

A day of gratitude.
A day of reflection.
A day of satisfaction.

A day of new beginning.
A day of new projection.
A day of new direction.

Life commences every day.
Mind commences every day.
World commences every day.

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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