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    dots Submission Name: Commencementdots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 269/107/55
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsCommencementdots
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    A day of celebration.
    A day of jubilation.
    A day of felicitation.

    A day of accolade.
    A day of ovation.
    A day of declaration.

    A day of gratitude.
    A day of reflection.
    A day of satisfaction.

    A day of new beginning.
    A day of new projection.
    A day of new direction.

    Life commences every day.
    Mind commences every day.
    World commences every day.




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