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Submission Name: I'm here dots

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Author:	BloodtornAngel
ASL Info:	21/F/inyour wildest dream
Elite Ratio:	2.47 - 21/28/43
Words:	72

Class/Type:	Deep Thought/Romance
Total Views:	367
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	502

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I'm here dots

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Dont worry
I'm here
I know I've been gone a long time
I know things have been bad
But I'm here
Dont worry
Take my hand once again
I'll lead you away from this
Dont worry
I'm here
Kiss me as the rain patters on
Hold me as the lightening strikes the night
I'm here
Dont worry
When the sun burns out
And the moon crumbles
Dont worry
I'll be right here

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It's always nice to have some reassurance from time to time, even better if everlasting.

I like that you've left the "who" up to the reader so each can personalize those words into hearing it from the one they want to hear it from.

This does invoke emotion, particularly if the "who" has been missed for some time.

Lloyd
| Posted on 2018-11-03 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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