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Can't let my demons go


Author: faideddarkness
ASL Info:    28 - Male - Idaho
Elite Ratio:    6.5 - 102 /56 /52
Words: 123
Class/Type: Rant /Misc
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Can't let my demons go



I can’t kill them
Years and years of trying,
Of failing
Still here though,
The demons inside my head

I hoped they’d leave, eventually
One day they’d just be gone
Idiotic perhaps
After all I gave them everything
Why would they leave that?

Maybe that's why they’ll leave
I give my all and they'll get bored
Happened before
Even that scares me though
If they leave, then who won’t?

I can’t let them go now
Not while we’re like this
Right?
You want me to drown them
So we can be happy again

Sorry to disappoint you
But I can’t drown them
Look!
They all look just like you
I could never kill something
So... so perfect




Submitted on 2018-08-07 22:03:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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