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    dots Submission Name: Can't let my demons godots

    Author: faideddarkness
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Idaho
    Elite Ratio:    6.53 - 101/55/51
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Rant/Misc
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    dotsCan't let my demons godots

    I can’t kill them
    Years and years of trying,
    Of failing
    Still here though,
    The demons inside my head

    I hoped they’d leave, eventually
    One day they’d just be gone
    Idiotic perhaps
    After all I gave them everything
    Why would they leave that?

    Maybe that's why they’ll leave
    I give my all and they'll get bored
    Happened before
    Even that scares me though
    If they leave, then who won’t?

    I can’t let them go now
    Not while we’re like this
    You want me to drown them
    So we can be happy again

    Sorry to disappoint you
    But I can’t drown them
    They all look just like you
    I could never kill something
    So... so perfect

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