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    dots Submission Name: When Crows Tick on Windowsdots

    Author: metallichick786
    ASL Info:    32/F/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 78/85/52
    Words: 206
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsWhen Crows Tick on Windowsdots

    I am the howl you hear in the wind
    I am the terror you cannot rescind
    The darkness that floods your room in the night
    I am the trees that moan in delight
    Shadows that dance on your walls while you sleep
    I am the nightmare
    Inside you, I creep
    I am the dark whisper of your name
    I am that dreaded feeling - 'going insane'
    I am the blood that drips down the knife
    I am your pleas as you beg for your life
    I encompass all Earth, Air, Wind, Fire
    I am inside you, I am your liar
    I am your crutch, your need, your vice
    I embody everything through this sacrifice
    I am the spell that ignites the fire
    The ancient magic rooted in ritual desires
    I am the moon, the sun, and the sky
    I am the presence you can't see with your eye
    I am not here nor there...
    I am simply everywhere
    I am the one that comes when you call
    I am the one to cure it all
    I am the vision inside your dreams
    I am the hand that muffles your screams
    You light a candle on your windowsill
    I am the one who ascends to silently kill

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