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    dots Submission Name: A Drinkdots

    Author: jjd
    ASL Info:    26 / M / Marshfield, Mo.
    Elite Ratio:    2.1 - 20/83/39
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Prose/Angry
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    dotsA Drinkdots

    A drink, to celebrate a great day. to celebrate a new promotion.
    A drink with the guys during the game.
    A drink with the wife to have a good time.
    A drink is was I thought it was for but in reality.

    A 5th to drown the stress of the day, the bills that pile up. to wash away the bullshit from work.
    A 5th to cope with reality.
    I seems that I find myself only to drink to get away, and when the stress becomes to much, a 5th forget it all.
    When I don't drink I hold everything in, and let the emotions build up. and once I have that 5th, all emotions pure out.

    I drink and try to convince myself that I am happy and there is no stress but underneath, she sees it all.

    Why can't I express myself without that drink?
    why must I lie to myself and say everything is okay but in reality, I'm losing everything by my side.
    A drink I must put down, and learn to deal with stress, to deal with reality.

    Submitted on 2018-08-15 02:56:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It isn't reality but what you are convinced of. Rationalize and then internalize whatever positive attitude may come of it - there is always one. Stop the drink or it will instead internalize what you dread.
    | Posted on 2018-08-19 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah it definitely sounds like drinking is becoming a real problem for you. I agree you should quit that stuff before it becomes impossible. Maybe try AA.
    | Posted on 2018-08-15 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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