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    dots Submission Name: Aftermath and Waltzdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 75/186/232
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 317
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsAftermath and Waltzdots
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    It was pointless you see,
    to start a beginning
    when the aftermath
    is much more interesting.

    Words waiting in the weeds,
    lightning to be bottled
    for so much more
    than childish fancy.
    Brilliance to be captured,
    captivating and none the wiser.
    Future and fantasy said
    come dance to the fire.

    Lost, life on the loam,
    entice truth to live a life unknown.
    Harmonious envy of the cutthroat,
    working hands of ambition,
    wrung sacrifice from men
    for words best wrote.

    The actor,
    avaricious, spiteful with a genuine smile.
    Crooked, off rhythm,
    words sharp like Vivaldi,
    yet without context - offer little depth
    to play in this rhapsody of
    conjecture and anecdotal nothing.




    Submitted on 2018-08-20 22:04:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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