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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 75/191/246
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsThe Searchdots
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    Procure the abstract clay of thought,
    shape what is known of philosophies,
    into Parnassus – cupidity above Delphi
    to escape human risk.
    Knowledge, the pelf,
    slithered from clairvoyant lips.

    A desire to see all there is,
    be, to feel and speak of it –
    Immortality,
    the unwritten and tragic wish.
    Conscript, King or priest,
    all search for the mother’s gift.

    The everlasting taste of truth,
    a fruit to be plucked;
    a pain which inflicts.
    Aspire to climb,
    either inscribed in divine,
    science or rhyme.

    We search.




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      We will seek and we will find, and we will always keep seeking.
    | Posted on 2018-08-20 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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