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    dots Submission Name: The Last to Walk the Earthdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 75/186/232
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 108
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    dotsThe Last to Walk the Earthdots
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    Breathless,
    you need not say,
    words cannot find you here.

    Torn not by limb,
    but page by page,
    unexpectedly lost in familiar.

    Trepidation,
    making a liar of prosperity,
    awaiting a perceived debt eternally.

    Inscribe a river into history,
    well refined, not smears
    of wasted ink - time.
    Rain of self-loathing will dry
    the love of life,
    bitterness sweet to drink
    compared to sympathy.
    Over the star lit sky,
    beyond the hubris of the moon
    all we wish is for an honest view.

    Of life
    Of love
    Of eternity

    Drifting in solitude,
    silent oceans to sail alone.
    The last to walk the earth
    will feel just as satisfied with being -
    empty.




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