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    dots Submission Name: Dirge of Nostalgiadots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 75/186/232
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsDirge of Nostalgiadots
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    Claim with conviction,
    entice and romanticize, charlatans
    cleaver in hand –
    butcher block dreams, chopped
    skewered on a spit.
    Served to snuffed flames
    of remembrance –
    suffocating, knowledge of it.

    Such a sensation,
    remaking the muse –
    creativity sculpted rationality
    to be familiar and new.
    Burning scrawl of minds,
    far superior, just to appear
    with truth as subjective view.
    The mob rises –

    They say,
    silence
    is
    sadness singing –

    Some hold onto memories,
    distorted Dahli designs –
    of a nonexistent place,
    history cannot see.
    Sustained on what will never die,
    sown by irrelevant dead –
    the dirge we reap,
    being alive.




    Submitted on 2018-08-20 22:11:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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