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    dots Submission Name: To the Epiloguedots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 75/191/246
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsTo the Epiloguedots
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    Let us start where the snow died,
    failed to fight away
    the warmth of love -
    and became rain.

    Why, my epilogue,
    must you abandon the pen
    which smears our ink
    and choose to erase -

    all that I was,
    leaving me to wander,
    alone -
    beyond the final page.




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