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    dots Submission Name: Love and Solitairedots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.02 - 75/187/232
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsLove and Solitairedots
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    Crisp, like morning dew,
    these tears beneath sad eyes.
    Enamored in architecture,
    beset by design – the mind escapes
    these minuscule thoughts
    I admire.

    Placed amongst the rubble,
    of self-assessment – failed to achieve
    even a simple regret,
    I search within.

    Who am I to profess my love,
    if not in solitaire?
    That I, complain of my failure,
    which being man,
    resignation to this idea
    my words are meaningless
    unless I become who I am destined –
    a reflection of love,
    in you – to see who I am,
    nothing but a lonely man.




    Submitted on 2018-08-20 22:16:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      If a heart should fall among diamonds, does it know it's a heart?

    I've always loved the game of solitaire; a game of chance but of strategy too. If you are unable to see the possibilities, the game does not advance well, even if the cards are lined up right.

    And so it is with people too. The first stanza is my favorite.
    | Posted on 2019-02-10 00:00:00 | by Soul-Hugger | [ Reply to This ]


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