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    dots Submission Name: Love and Solitairedots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 75/186/232
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 95
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    dotsLove and Solitairedots
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    Crisp, like morning dew,
    these tears beneath sad eyes.
    Enamored in architecture,
    beset by design – the mind escapes
    these minuscule thoughts
    I admire.

    Placed amongst the rubble,
    of self-assessment – failed to achieve
    even a simple regret,
    I search within.

    Who am I to profess my love,
    if not in solitaire?
    That I, complain of my failure,
    which being man,
    resignation to this idea
    my words are meaningless
    unless I become who I am destined –
    a reflection of love,
    in you – to see who I am,
    nothing but a lonely man.




    Submitted on 2018-08-20 22:16:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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