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    dots Submission Name: Convergencedots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.02 - 75/187/232
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsConvergencedots
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    Ashen monoliths climb the sky
    summoning storm and silence,
    a harbinger of what is to come
    as fingers of a summer ghost
    pressed closed, the lips of our sun.

    A convergent idea,
    that for a moment
    light can rest on the laurels
    of knowing what has grown.

    Combined yet not convoluted,
    these flights of fancy
    into oddity; into possibility –
    are in bloom,
    beneath the rain,
    never to drown
    but to be washed away.




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