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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 75/191/246
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    Surcease our past, past our cerulean sky
    into photographs distorted in obeisance
    by imagination; by nostalgic chimes.
    Glossy colors of remembrance,
    ashen and alabaster are entwined
    between the murk of black
    and decaying sepia of time.

    Nameless epitaph,
    unknowing epithet –
    gives time for one to wonder.
    Countenance of the contemporary
    to wander
    if upon the day discovered
    will we wail for our Ulalume
    or be held in hand the same?
    Someone else to view lost love,
    in this –
    the still of life.




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