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    dots Submission Name: Born of the Mouthdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 303/230/267
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsBorn of the Mouthdots
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    { To tire of the highs and lows
    Of the endless circle here and there we sew

    Give time to everything
    And everything will give you time . . . }

    The rap rap wrapping of its own poetic decore
    Our own prophetic faces we of ourselves implore

    Begetting of an age that in our eyes restore
    Once held true at hand, said and passed through timeless lore

    This in everlasting sound accounts invoice
    Acknowledgement of what was born by personal choice
    For that One Godly power relay
    The exploration and comprehension of individual daresay.




    Submitted on 2018-08-20 22:36:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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