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All Time Low

Author: Janesaddiction
ASL Info:    48/F/Somewhere on A1A
Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 8 /25 /20
Words: 33
Class/Type: Rant /Venting
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All Time Low

My heart hurts for her
woefully pushed aside
punishment of tomorrow
for perceived injustice of yesterday

Lifting the veil of narcissism
without rational thought
or any thought
revealing his all time low

Submitted on 2018-08-22 13:33:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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