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    dots Submission Name: Genesisdots
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    Author: saartha
    ASL Info:    27/F/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 230/389/136
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsGenesisdots
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    The night wind picks up
    just a little, and the leaves

    like the Creation of Adam
    reach out their fingers

    the stars, too, pointing
    the darkened field

    the failing thyme pot
    thick scents of marigold

    and me, holding a cat
    humming on the porch

    all of us extending
    extending

    No Adam, no God
    just this moment

    we have created
    wholecloth together.




    Submitted on 2018-09-10 00:48:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TbaNS3bxtUU

    had minute 22 playing as i read this. what a state of relaxation.
    | Posted on 2018-09-11 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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