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Author:	saartha
ASL Info:	27/F/US
Elite Ratio:	4.03 - 230/390/136
Words:	71

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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Genesis

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The night wind picks up
just a little, and the leaves

like the Creation of Adam
reach out their fingers

the stars, too, pointing
the darkened field

the failing thyme pot
thick scents of marigold

and me, holding a cat
humming on the porch

all of us extending
extending

No Adam, no God
just this moment

we have created
wholecloth together.

Submitted on 2018-09-10 00:48:00 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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An appreciation of the senses is truly a blessing. This is a nice shift between that which might seem ineffable which transcends seemingly backwards through a thoughtful and finer appreciation of what we can truly feel and better appreciate, this sensory scope of creation.

This kind of reminds me of something I wrote once, thanks.

Lloyd
| Posted on 2018-10-04 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TbaNS3bxtUU

had minute 22 playing as i read this. what a state of relaxation.
| Posted on 2018-09-11 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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