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    Author: Daniel Barlow
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                   Consider the context of current.
                   Why such a thing should exist?
                   From what intelligence - life form struck.
                   Filling a complex and requisite requirement
                   for identity.
                   Waking itself. shaking itself in little droplets,


                   Traveling. Availing -      welling.
                   layer on layer
                             Or lying supinely flat













                                                      who knows why water makes land?


         
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         it must




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