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    Author: poetotoe
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    Legends

    Your lips are Trogen Horses
    that open any heart their soul
    you are the David of the world.

    Florence Italy has but a copy of
    but our world has the living copy
    a Michelangelo cut out of marble.

    Please live on in legends, this place
    your lips are a testimony to your love
    my Aphrodite kiss of love I give to you.

    Surrender a kiss, a love, body, your soul
    live forever in those you love, to love you
    gifts from God angels to love on this earth.




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