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Author:	jackz
ASL Info:	24/F/OH
Elite Ratio:	3.76 - 591/623/381
Words:	117

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
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Chasing The Lie dots

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Chasing the lie haphazardly

Searching for you
Then again searching for no one at all
For you have moved onto a place, an atmosphere, a spiritual existence

Chasing the lie aimlessly

Only ever thinking of the next time I can get high
knowing I shouldn't nevertheless knowing I just cannot not
It'll begin with a drink
End with a needle

Madly chasing the lie

Its depression
I know this yet the darkness curls itself around me
engulfing every part of me
Hearing I do not deserve to be
Wanting nothing more than what it wants
For me to cease being

Irrationally chasing this lie
These lies...

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Am I to understand from this that you have fallen off the wagon and are back on heroin? If so this makes me sad, you were clean for quite some time.

Bruce
| Posted on 2018-09-25 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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