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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.97 - 2130/2088/1614
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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                        it is a thing - to have someone absolutely rip into you
                        showing themselves at their absolute combative worst
                        requiring of you your best









                        and i feel like the dam. or the barrier
                        your words crash violently into
                        breaking off chunks of concrete







         



                                                                     not the wall.






                         but the water.                    






    Submitted on 2018-10-01 14:12:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2018-10-02 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]
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    | Posted on 2018-10-02 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]
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    | Posted on 2018-10-02 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]
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    | Posted on 2018-10-02 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]
      
















    based off the fact that i give a fuck

         

    how do you? mumble tenderly not to rub you in one spot bc
    the skin is sensitive - when i have sat in
    a car for 8 hrs and taken your shit.






    | Posted on 2018-10-02 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]


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