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    Author: hyproglo
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 180/258/153
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Dwindles down and supersedes around

    Instances

    Every one appeared
    Every one

    Everyone

    Shared...in that space of time that it forgot

    Turned into memory
    Love
    Life
    Laughter
    Fear
    Jealousy

    Contentment

    C
    o
    n
    t
    e
    n
    t

    m
    e
    a
    n
    t

    Whisper it
    Whisper one more time

    Let the biting wind or gentle breeze remind

    Everyone who cares to indulge
    In every one of these

    Instances...





    Submitted on 2018-10-04 18:45:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That's a nice reflection on reflections. ;) Cute wordplay going on here, I'm guessing many will not catch some of the implications but it got my graying gray cells perked up a bit.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2018-10-11 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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