Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Everyonedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: poetotoe
    Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 635/447/528
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 225
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1054



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsEveryonedots
    -------------------------------------------


    Everyone fear not God’s Love
    angels have fallen to guide you
    escape with love fly into eternity.
    Ride a stallion, on moonbeams, fly
    save this life that is given, unto you.

    The beast within you thirsts for more
    it feeds on our tears, our hearts on fire
    then damns our pain, our love, and glory
    the more it wants, the more it cannot have.

    What is our true love, and it frightens them
    inceptive with its kiss, deadly to its game?
    Among angels of mercy two, cry no more
    more than love ever wanted you can be
    tormented by love and caged by love.

    Awake the angelic love inside of us
    at dawn, an angel wants to talk to us
    that shares our passions, our breaths
    on pillowed clouds within your dreams.

    Then ask for nothing more, nothing less
    than our love, for you, our angels to wait.
    Now and always forever our love is theirs,
    together two will search the constellations.




    Submitted on 2018-10-06 17:06:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    202194

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Tides of Man written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Watch them Die written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Bam (Awash). written by Daniel Barlow
    Can't let my demons go written by faideddarkness
    "other people don't get that" written by Daniel Barlow
    ME written by jjd
    not alone written by Daniel Barlow
    Where is My Ghost written by ForgottenGraves
    Lunch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    ... written by Daniel Barlow
    Everyone written by poetotoe
    Love and Solitaire written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Some of it written by Daniel Barlow
    Bam Bam / Bre-anna written by Daniel Barlow
    One day older, One year wiser. written by Rhythmal
    Aftermath and Waltz written by HisNameIsNoMore
    I am a sorry son. Part two written by MyPeriodical
    Saying it to you with some gangsta shit written by Daniel Barlow
    To the Epilogue written by HisNameIsNoMore
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Limbo written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Bam written by Daniel Barlow
    an explanation of how i was not good written by Daniel Barlow
    On Top of a Water Wheel written by Wolfwatching
    A Fire! A Knife! A Black Crow Calls! written by HisNameIsNoMore
    When Crows Tick on Windows written by metallichick786
    You Make Me speechless written by elephantasia
    Stretto written by saartha
    I'm here written by BloodtornAngel
    Legends written by poetotoe

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry