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    dots Submission Name: Everyonedots
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    Author: poetotoe
    Elite Ratio:    2.03 - 639/448/529
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsEveryonedots
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    Everyone fear not God’s Love
    angels have fallen to guide you
    escape with love fly into eternity.
    Ride a stallion, on moonbeams, fly
    save this life that is given, unto you.

    The beast within you thirsts for more
    it feeds on our tears, our hearts on fire
    then damns our pain, our love, and glory
    the more it wants, the more it cannot have.

    What is our true love, and it frightens them
    inceptive with its kiss, deadly to its game?
    Among angels of mercy two, cry no more
    more than love ever wanted you can be
    tormented by love and caged by love.

    Awake the angelic love inside of us
    at dawn, an angel wants to talk to us
    that shares our passions, our breaths
    on pillowed clouds within your dreams.

    Then ask for nothing more, nothing less
    than our love, for you, our angels to wait.
    Now and always forever our love is theirs,
    together two will search the constellations.




    Submitted on 2018-10-06 17:06:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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