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    dots Submission Name: Where is My Ghostdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.49 - 5/120/135
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWhere is My Ghostdots
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    Why are you hiding from me?
    Am I really that scary?

    I know I have hate in my eyes
    And probably to much anger inside
    But in my world
    That's how I protect myself

    I know I'm not who I used to be
    But am I really that dark?

    Causing others pain is second nature to me
    Perhaps I should try and change that
    But then what would happen?
    Would they walk all over me again?

    I really am covered in scars
    And I guess the bruises don't help

    Suppose I could cover that up again
    But should I have to?
    Why shouldn't I be proud of me?
    After all you did watch me bleed




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