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i don't know what it is about a woman - she can't keep it to
herself - but has to tell a man six different times the one
thing that will make him feel as if he has been shot.
like, it's not enough you are good - she has to test that you're
thick and thin
for better or worse. done under duress.
i know lost amoungst your things is a manual as yet
unread, understanding the scorpio man.
to me that's what's really stupid, not engaging the person
you expect to be your back - or being engaged enough
yourself to know if they're even there anymore.
i can't say if it was you or me or both of us - that withheld
just the little bit that was needed to keep our beautiful
i think, maybe it was you.
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