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    dots Submission Name: One day older, One year wiser.dots
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    Author: Rhythmal
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 29/50/47
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    Description:
       I'll tell you their really isn't enough regulation on this whole wisdom/year thing. Honestly, I swear I used to get a good 1:1 rate on that shit, now it feels more like a 1:4 and it just keeps getting worse the older I get. I've got ten years on you but I'll bet you'll have me matched or beat in another ten.

    Anyway, Happy birthday kid, I hope you enjoy it.


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    dotsOne day older, One year wiser.dots
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    A moment
    A minute
    A year
    Not so different from the one before
    the same seven days repeating.

    Do you feel any different
    any older, any stronger
    any bolder
    I never did
    In the moment
    On the day.

    But even still, the days will change, the weeks and the months and the years as well.

    Every night your mind steeps in the collecting pool of your experience.

    It creeps up slowly
    in the warm bright days
    and the clear brisk nights.

    The leaves will fall and fuel the fires of your growing heart.

    You won't feel it or see it just yet.
    One day you might.
    When you find yourself moving forward with ever increasing speed toward the inevitable uncertainty.
    You may know then
    The weight and the value of these days.




    Submitted on 2018-10-27 00:53:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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